Claimed (The Circulate Series)
“I am a Lokoti Werewolf.”
– “Oh, is that a name for an ice hockey team, or something?”
Career woman Jessica Tandy, has a rest stop in a tiny town called Alma, in the Alaska Range. Coming back from the ‘camping trip from hell’, with a cold and obnoxious boyfriend; she meets Flint Riverclaw, a Native Alaskan. The handsome stranger sees she’s unwell with her diabetes and insists on shouting her food and drink.
He offers to take her to Anchorage, since her boyfriend who’s driving, has been drinking beer. Jessica accepts and the two continue to become acquainted, during the journey. Flint’s strong build, handsome features and kindness wins her over, so much so, she invites him into her hotel room. Although there are moments where he growled, his teeth felt sharp or she could have sworn his eyes glowed turquoise; Jessica rates it as her best sexual experience.
The next morning, she tiptoes out when he’s still asleep, to catch her flight back to Seattle. However, she can’t get the man out of her mind as her body won’t stop shaking. She’s shocked three days later when out of the blue, Flint shows up at her apartment to tell her two things; he is a Lokoti Werewolf and she is his pregnant mate.“I am a Lokoti Werewolf.”
– “Oh, is that a name for an ice hockey team, or something?”
Career woman Jessica Tandy, has a rest stop in a tiny town called Alma, in the Alaska Range. Coming back from the ‘camping trip from hell’, with a cold and obnoxious boyfriend; she meets Flint Riverclaw, a Native Alaskan. The handsome stranger sees she’s unwell with her diabetes and insists on shouting her food and drink.
He offers to take her to Anchorage, since her boyfriend who’s driving, has been drinking beer. Jessica accepts and the two continue to become acquainted, during the journey. Flint’s strong build, handsome features and kindness wins her over, so much so, she invites him into her hotel room. Although there are moments where he growled, his teeth felt sharp or she could have sworn his eyes glowed turquoise; Jessica rates it as her best sexual experience.
The next morning, she tiptoes out when he’s still asleep, to catch her flight back to Seattle. However, she can’t get the man out of her mind as her body won’t stop shaking. She’s shocked three days later when out of the blue, Flint shows up at her apartment to tell her two things; he is a Lokoti Werewolf and she is his pregnant mate.
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Not worth reading,
I didn’t connect with the characters, the dialogue wasn’t very good, and the random comma usage made me want to email the author and offer to edit. The story didn’t seem to flow very well, either. All in all, I’d advise readers to pass on this one.
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|Might need work, but good start.,
While not the greatest story I’ve ever read it is much better than a one star book. According to the blurb at the end of the this was made up of chapters from an upcoming book, which may be why it was a little unpolished. I liked some of the ideas she had for the werewolves that could be expanded on in future stories. It was an easy evening read and was interesting enough to make me want to find out more about the word she is creating. I wish it was longer and more fleshed out, but perhaps that will happen in the upcoming book. Overall, I enjoyed the story.
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|Please judge this book for yourself! It’s pretty good!,
I am very disappointed to see so many people giving this book a 1 star. Wow! Some of these reviews are HARSH, too HARSH! While there may have been a grammatical error here and there, it certainly doesn’t read so choppy and awful that the story is bad. The author put a unique twist on a werewolf story, and up until last night, I’d never imagined a werewolf in a hotel room, and even being able to shift half way into his other form. I’ve read some reviews on here that complained that the dialogue was choppy or amateurish…Well if you read the book, then you would know that the 29 year old main character, Jessica Tandy, said she FELT like she was a 18 yr old virgin again or something like that. Being around and near Flint, made her stumble over her words, and struggle for what to say. The author conveyed this very well. Also…Flint’s dialogue went perfectly with his character. He’s a Lokoti Indian american, who has different mannerisms and a different way of talking than we do. I hate to see readers compare fantasy fiction to every day human life, and how things are in the real world. It’s fantasy fiction for a reason People come on! I am a self published author myself, and I try not to leave reviews for other authors work anymore, because there has always been some sort of back lash from it, but I had to step up and say something here. I do not know this author, and have never communicated with her in any kind of way, but I do respect her hard work, and I will say that this book deserves way more than 1 star. It was a great read, and I will be checking out more of her work in the future. Not every book is for everyone, so I hope that any future readers will form their own opinions by reading the book for themselves.
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